I know there is still some work to be done on this paper
before it is complete. My final copy will have a conclusion, better
transitions, citations, better grammar and sentence structure and more outside information that my rough draft does
not. But even as it is now, my paper is already 6 full pages long and might be
longer, is that ok or should I try to shorten it? Please let me know what parts
you think would be good to shorten up or even cut out. Thank you.
Also, I remembered that you were talking about a movie in class where pigs were eating human flesh. Surprisingly that description sounded familiar. I think the movie your talking about is Snatch (2000).
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